Critique my Fox

[Greed-checkTheTek]

Been using fox for about 2 weeks or so, tips on what I need to work on ?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7C_UsLHhugM&feature=youtu.be

 

[Mikkelmann]

Your movement could use some work. To pratice this just wavedash a lot and pratice wavelands. You roll a lot this guy was not punishing it but you can in higher level play. Your SHDL are good. Work on short hop nair shines for approaching but don't spam it or you could get punish but if you do wave shines out of it you could get some pressure going. I'll edit this post later on.

 

[Greed-checkTheTek]

Your movement could use some work. To pratice this just wavedash a lot and pratice wavelands. You roll a lot this guy was not punishing it but you can in higher level play. Your SHDL are good. Work on short hop nair shines for approaching but don't spam it or you could get punish but if you do wave shines out of it you could get some pressure going. I'll edit this post later on.

Thank you for the advice! I'll def work on that thanks

 

[Ethan.]

yeah i agree with michael. Your movement seemed really unsmooth. look at how mango or leffen move around the stage and try to be able to emulate that. I realize this is netplay so thats part of it, but its worth looking into.

A note on the doc matchup specifically, upthrow-uair is pretty difficult to get due to docs janky weight, so try baiting out his double jump to hit him out of that. Afterward keep him in the air, doc is horrible when someone is below him. As far as edgeguarding, its literally as simple as grabbing the ledge to force his down-b, then hit him out of it. If he recovers high, try to bait out the cape and hit him out of it.

 

[Greed-checkTheTek]

yeah i agree with michael. Your movement seemed really unsmooth. look at how mango or leffen move around the stage and try to be able to emulate that. I realize this is netplay so thats part of it, but its worth looking into.

A note on the doc matchup specifically, upthrow-uair is pretty difficult to get due to docs janky weight, so try baiting out his double jump to hit him out of that. Afterward keep him in the air, doc is horrible when someone is below him. As far as edgeguarding, its literally as simple as grabbing the ledge to force his down-b, then hit him out of it. If he recovers high, try to bait out the cape and hit him out of it.

Thanks for the advice ! Much appreciated