Critique my Fox!

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Swann was Falco. I am Fox.
I'm pretty new to Smash Bros competitive (~4 months), and my Melee fox is even newer. If I could recieve some critique from you all, I would very much appreciate it. Some things I think I did wrong: shielding too much, whiffing grabs, full hopping dairs, not lasering enough, and doing the same recovery.

What did I do wrong, and how can I fix it?

Thanks everyone!

 

[Captain Zack]

idk from what i saw you just kinda stood there and shielded. you didn't really capitalize on any stray hits you got either. you were also pretty predictable with the moves you did too. fox is a fast character, using him is hard and takes years to perfect; don't get discouraged.