critique my fox

[Animal]

these are just friendlies, but this is the first time ever having actual footage of me and honeybadger spoc Vlll was our first tourny (both got 25th in singles, and 9th in teams) so let me know what you think i can improve on for ROM2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_S0_f6w26cI (Animal fox vs Honeybadger Falco) set

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kVdlfw9Fgss Animal vs Honeybadger Yoshis

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XzkdxWgP8a4&feature=related Animal vs honeybadger corneria personal fav

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NAHzaC_4Spw&feature=related Animal vs Honeybader dream land


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gr-taJfm17Q&feature=channel Animal fox vs Honeybadger Jiggz. aka mini mango

 

[MarioMariox2]

Hmm, I only watched the Corneria and Yoshis vid, and I can say there were many opportunities that you could've gotten a smash in. Remember that spacies have good KO potential and though smash-spam is bad, decently spaced and timed smashes can lead to KOs at less%s. Also, don't forget to use your environment to your advantage. The fin in Corneria can be walljumped and ledgegrabbed so takes little factors like these into consideration.

In addition to this, there are other ATs that seemed possible in these matches. Namely, OutOfShield-moves like OOS-Usmash or OOS-grab.

I admit you're a whole lot greater than me (don't compare me by my vids, those are old), though a friend once reminded me, Techskill is nice, but what's really needed is mindgames. Predict and react.

Well, and your DI needs work too :D

-MMx2

 

[Animal]

Hmm, I only watched the Corneria and Yoshis vid, and I can say there were many opportunities that you could've gotten a smash in. Remember that spacies have good KO potential and though smash-spam is bad, decently spaced and timed smashes can lead to KOs at less%s. Also, don't forget to use your environment to your advantage. The fin in Corneria can be walljumped and ledgegrabbed so takes little factors like these into consideration.

In addition to this, there are other ATs that seemed possible in these matches. Namely, OutOfShield-moves like OOS-Usmash or OOS-grab.
Predict and react.

I admit you're a whole lot greater than me (don't compare me by my vids, those are old), though a friend once reminded me, Techskill is nice, but what's really needed is mindgames.
Well, and your DI needs work too :D

-MMx2

haha nah its greatly appreciated that you took the time, ya my DI is bad im working on that and ya agreed i need 2 work on punishing better and more effectively. it was friendlies so i wasnt on top of my game but my shine out of shields were really off, and same with upsmash out of shield. i feel in this metagame to be great u have to be able to utilize everything out of shield. but i like the environment advice. did u see my mindgame on corneria where i made him get taken off by the shiip? best mindgame ever hahah
again though thanks for the advice and ill try to improve for ROM2

 

[MarioMariox2]

No problem, and yes, the Arwing mindgame was ****.