Critique my Fox please.

[Zjiin]

I picked up fox a few months ago and decided to make him my main, since he obviously has great potential compared to my old main samus. I seem to have gotten the basics down, but I have some trouble beating people that I know don't play as much. I just need help seeing what i'm doing right and wrong. [aside from tech skill, which will come in more time] Any advice would help.

~Z

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gP15ff-e-LQ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NOS7iQ64qpg

 

[Giggidax]

well it looks like u do pretty well, but as u said some of ur tech skill has yet to come. ur shining did a pretty good job on catching him off guard but u could have followed up at certain times. and also u can tell how u underestimated marths hitbox. like when u try to runup>fake out, u would end up a little bit too close and catch the fsmash.

u should maybe try and work on waveshining or just following up after ur drillshine, etc. like drillshine wavedash usmash or wavedash into another shine. but if u wanna get more complicated then go for it

 

[Zjiin]

Ack, i'm aware that i don't follow up on my drill shine as i should, but i'm still having trouble getting the max distance on the wavedash mid combo. And especially on marth, who i've noticed you have to drill shine to wavedash, and then foxtrot, just to grab him again since he slides so far back when he doesn't CC. Much appreciated information though.

 

[Oskurito]

You're good at shine spiking but you lack a lot of tech skill + your opponent isn't too good or decent.

Weird music, i like it

an advice on marth: drillshine + up throw + uair (x3) = dead

or infinite wallless drillshine like MOFO did, if you are enough skilled.

 

[the_air_up_there7]

You seem okay, marth's are so annoying. Try practicing waveshining.