Critique my Falco!

[CandyAppleBlueCherry]

Firstly, I must apologize for the crappy quality videos, both gameplaywise ( I had to sandbag or he wouldn't play with me ; ; ) and video-quality wise (we lost the very top and bottom of the screen, it was our first time trying out his capture card). ^^; but I need some help with my Falco tech skill. I just wanna know what you all think is best for me to work on; in terms of approach/etc., as I said, I had to do some sandbagging so that he'd still play.

Vs. Jiggly:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=INe2HSUHgnc

Vs. Sheik:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=reRzE0YanWA
(Note: he picked up Sheik, like, the day before this video. So again, I only want help on the precision/speed of my tech skills, what I need to improve on, etc.)

Thank you in advance for any help ^^

 

[DtJ Jungle]

well since you were sandbagging itsa hard to tell what you really need to work on, but overall i'd say your basic tech skill is very good. now its a measure of doing what when. you had way to many dtilts, i saw you take unnecessary damage because you were trying to dtilt him. also, you tried several fancy edgehogs, when you can just roll, wd ff onto the ledge. there were also alot of nairs and dash attacks, not that those are bad moves, just like be less predictable

Tech skill wise, wavelands, jc shines for shield pressure, and utilizing waveshine would help

 

[CandyAppleBlueCherry]

Thank you for the help ^^; I should have more videos against someone who's a decent amount better than me on Sunday. But yeah, in these matches I was just playing fancy haha XD

But thank you again. And yeah, I need to start wavelanding more, I do it all the time with Fox and Marth but never with Falco for some reason ^^;. JC shines I'm not very good with... the rhythm is too weird @_@; I can do them as Fox only haha.

 

[DtJ Jungle]

yeah with falco its more with a rhythm instead of just speedn