Critique meh Mario..

[LaserBust]

Yeh, Im pretty new 2 this guy. I secondaried him N melee cuz I jus loved his flow/style.
After expirementing with pretty much every char. N the game I think I found a set of em I like.. including Mario.

Umm, I made a few mistakes cuz of lag.. (No Johns, lolz) Like I may have Fsmashed 3x N a row cuz I was tryN 2 Bair 2 fast. Once I did the sexiest Fludd > Cape and I meant 2 ledgehog but I messed up (Cuz of lag) and suicided. But try yur best 2 critique anyway. Soz 4 the quality.. my oppenent recorded..

So yeh, enuf introduction, just gimme all the help/advice u can. I rly wanna improve on my secondaries.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vEjiW71dNo4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ja7OxRxuBZ4

EDIT - Thats my clan mate btw, also a IRL friend. We mayb recording some more 2morow so I may add a couple more better quality vids this week. Cc Clan ftw!

 

[Ranjiz]

saw the second match and i thought u should have used up smash more as a kill move because toon link is pretty lightweight. on a side note, you were pretty predictable

 

[LaserBust]

saw the second match and i thought u should have used up smash more as a kill move because toon link is pretty lightweight.

Ye I noticed that to.. I neglect Usmash 4 some reason.. mayb its the lack of range that gets me. But anyway, yeh my friend sayed I waz becoming predictable too, so yeh.. Thx 4 yur help.

Any more advice pl0x?