Critiqie my Yoshi

[doom dragon 105]

i have finaly put up matches so yeah here

Doom(Yoshi) vs Adhd (Falco)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZN7YIg25rM

Doom(Yoshi) vs Adhd (Roy)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-RYPnKlsB7c

thanks for watching

 

[technomancer]

Not bad. Be a little more patient, space more, and use your freaking Fsmash.

That's on the Roy match, the Falco match ... well Falco > Yoshi so I guess you did pretty good considering, no advice aside from "don't get ***** so much." :/

 

[Dory..?]

Not bad. Be a little more patient, space more, and use your freaking Fsmash.

That's on the Roy match, the Falco match ... well Falco > Yoshi so I guess you did pretty good considering, no advice aside from "don't get ***** so much." :/

And maybe(just Maybe) try combo a little more with those grabs, and yes spacing too

 

[doom dragon 105]

thanks but i my timeing and L canceling ok