Where to start, where to start
1.) Not the best critique video (maybe a few too many tornadoes on both parts)
2.) You are doing yourself no good walking into his whorenadoes, he is vulnerable very many times after every tornado, that is when you: jab, grab, f-smash, SHaerial (dair) and then chase after him, you can't let him bog down in one spot and spam the hell out of his tornado. You are the better player but you weren't playing smart.
3.) Tornado is NOT an aerial attack, do not use it like at 2:15, you easily could have uair, then bairs, you need more fundamental aerial attacks
4.) After about 2:30 the game started to change, which was good because you were using real attacks, but careful about using green missile so blindly, you would be punished by anyone else for charging it and then missing it.
5.) Approaching is why you didn't win this battle immediately, your approaches had little variation, you need to do a couple of things in approaches, first, mix them up, second, use fireballs and SHaerials not tornados, and also, powershelid his counter attacks during you approach to prevent injury and sliding.
6.) 3:10-3:15=NOOONONONONOONONOOOOO. Use that move 2-3 time a match, it is a surprise move, see green missile thread for in depth analysis.
7.) Don't use Luigi's dash attack execpt to break up someone camping, dash attack has uses in team battles.
8.) Second video was a little more of the same, 4:36 use grab, and get close he was very vulnerable, even if he was able to use a whorenado, you only risk a little bit of damage for what its worth
9.) You were lacking Luigi's surplus of KO moves, no UpBs, no ^f-smashes, and what happened to d-smashes.
10.) You could **** that MK offstage, do it.
11.) Use the right side of Corneria, thats a good spot for u-smashes (not charged, no need to charge smashes)
12) D-throw follow ups consist of aerials.
That concludes my critique
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