Cool Story Bro #2

[ZeroUnderOne]

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The Egg
By Andy Weir

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<div class="alt2" style="border: 1px solid; margin: 0px; padding: 6px;"> <div style="display: none;"> You were on your way home when you died.
It was a car accident. Nothing particularly remarkable, but fatal nonetheless. You left behind a wife and two children. It was a painless death. The EMTs tried their best to save you, but to no avail. Your body was so utterly shattered you were better off, trust me.
And that

 

[Falconv1.0]

Cool broken blog, bro.

Also I get this feeling you're going to ignore any criticism of your writing and keep writing more stories without any changes for the better.

 

[Pachinkosam]

pain its not a good felling.

 

[DtJ Glyphmoney]

I actually think I've heard this one before, if its about how the only two people are really you and God and how everyone else in the world is just you living through a different life. All about how you shouldn't be a **** to people since you're not really that different anyway.

 

[Falconv1.0]

pain its not a good felling.

Hey sw96, what year were you born?

Also yes, pain is not a good felling. Totally great feeling though.

 

[Spelt]

According to his profile 1996

 

[ZeroUnderOne]

Hmm, seems to only post it correctly in full preview mode.

http://www.smashboards.com/news/blogs/57548/4887/cool-story-bro-2

::shrugs::

 

[FoxBlaze71]

Please take your pen off of the paper and shove it up your ***.

 

[alex6309]

Please take your pen off of the paper and shove it up your ***.

Thats a little harsh.
Oh well, I considered it decent 7.99. Not that I'm "perfect" in any other way that you are, alias we are all the same "Different" you might consider to other people, but after a while you are more close than you think all because we are all "Related" by the first human beings. We are all of their spawns.....

 

[Vinylic.]

That story kind of reminded me a portion of the movie, "wristcutters: a love story."