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[MetaKnightmare]

I haven't tried my team out competitively yet, so please give a lot of feedback. I haven't kept track of the EV so i'll give estimates

Forretress @ Leftovers
Impish/Sturdy
120 hp/ 158 def/ 220 sdef
-Stealth Rock
-Spikes
-Gyro Ball
-Rapid Spin
Sets up spikes/stealth rock, spins away if they try to set up either

Zangoose @ Choice Scarf
Quiet/Immunity
252 atk/6 sdef/252 spd
-Rock Slide
-Shadow Claw
-Crush Claw
-Close combat
Quiet nature b/c it is shiny, choice scarf because of high base atk. Sadly, zangoose has a bad physical movepool, so this is what I could come up with

Absol @ Scope Lens
Adamant/Super Luck
252 atk/252 spd/6 hp
-Swords Dance
-Psycho Cut
-Night Slash
-Stone Edge
Swords dance for huge attack boost, scope lens, ability, and move cause criticals left and right

Crobat @ Lax Incense
Jolly/Inner focus
252 spd/129 hp/129 atk
-Double Team
-Mean Look
-X-Scissor
-Toxic

Mean looks the foe, uses toxic, double team, continues pattern, lax incense for more evasion, X-Scissor for psychic types

Torkoal @ Leftovers
Relaxed/White Smoke
120 hp/ 158 def/ 220 sdef
-Substitute
-Amnesia
-Lava Plume
-HP Electric

Sets up substitute, amnesia to increase special defense, lava plume because of high burn chance, HP electric removes water type problems

Carnavine @ Big Root
Modest/Levitate
252 HP/252 satk
-Substitute
-Leech Seed
-Giga Drain
-Ingrain

Great HP recovery, hiding behind the substitute, forces switches w/leech seed.

Thanks for reading all this!

 

[whiterob]

Okay, Forretress should be relaxed nature because that will make it slower, thus making gyro ball more powerful. Also, almost all people play with "hax items" and "evasion" clauses. This essentially means that items such as lax incense are banned and that moves such as double team are banned. Because pretty much every person plays with those two clauses, you're going to need to change Crobat.

 

[MysticKenji]

No Lax Incense
I second Forretress being Relaxed
Zangoose should not be Quiet. Breed another.
Carnivine needs his last 4 EVs

 

[MetaKnightmare]

K... Zangoose i got shiny so thats why...

 

[9Kplus1]

=_=... just b/c it's a different color doesn't mean you should use it in battle... anywayz, to your team-

Tress- Explosion/Zap Cannon > Steath Rock/Spikes; Breed Relaxed... please.

Zangoose- If a poke is shiny... that means you'll use it? If you're the type of person who doesn't care, use this-

Zangoose @LEFTOVERS/FOCUS SASH
Quiet Nature
EVs:252hp/200spattk/56attk

Thunderbolt/Wave
Shadow Ball
Crush Claw
Ice Punch

Crobat + Absol- A few things wrong here:
1. Double Team is a banned move.

2. Hax items are banned too.

Torkoal- It's no where near fast and durable enough to setup a Sub w/o having less than 1/4 hp left. Give it Curse + Rest.

Carnavine- OMFG! Why did you choose Modest? Bold/Calm... please. Ingrain is instant phail on anything. Toxic > Ingrain and HP Fire > Giga Drain.

Overall- 29.2/100- You really haven't battled competitivly... have you?

 

[MetaKnightmare]

Nope... though thx for the feedback ny wayz