Blues nintendo tale

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i came here to announce i will be starting a story adding an episode everyday it will include all mainstream nintendo games and it will be epic i will start episode 1 today *not a acual video*

I STRONGLY INCOURAGE ANY FAN ART just post it in a post and follow the instructions on the characters looks below ill keep it updated
BLUE:
blonde haired girl she has a skirt on and fingerless gloves
GREEN:
green haired guy that is a bit of a nerd but a cool looking nerd he has rectanglular glasses
RED:
brown haired guy who wears a bandana headband and dosent wear a shirt and he has a small pony tail
YELLOW:
a girl with purple hair who looks like a punk she carrys a guitar everywhere she goes and isent ugly infact she's very pretty

heres kinda a closer look at whats it about:
Blue is completeing her triforce journey but to do so she must collect all gym badges while saving the world from certain doom from the dark elite and team dino while making many friends along the way

new episodes appear every day

episode 1: I CHOOSE YOU?
Hello my name is Blue, And i have a dream, a dream to become a triforce hero. Today i start my journey i get to get my first teacher today!!!
honey!!!! lunch is ready!!! i dont have time mom im going to Oaks lab to get my first teacher!!allready dear? okay well im gonna miss you dont go to far now!! MOOOM IM GOING ON A JOURNEY IM GONNA BE TRAVELING ACCROSS THE LAND!!! sure you are dear. ^_^ now have fun.Whatever mom...
*Blue goes to prof. Oaks lab*
HEY red hey green where's yellow? oh he allready started he got the teacher ugh... mr. ressetti? i think i heard he was a *** and forced yellow to start right away and reds next to get his teacher. said green. oh okay! said blue. NEEEXT!!!! said a aggravated voice from inside the lab
*red walks in*
who do you think he'll get Blue? asked green. well there's 4 teachers ressetti's gone only ones left are navi donkey kong and ROB i dont really care which one i get i just want one!!
*door opens and red walks out with donkey kong ignoring blue and green*
why'd he just walk off like that green? Well i heard donkey kongs the silent type... maybe thats part of his first lesson i dont know? answered green. NEEEEXT!!!!! well thats my cue blue see ya later!!! okay bye!!!
*green walks out with ROB*
Well i wanted to say bye Blue after all those years of pretending to be a hero we are accually getting the chance so i thought HECK... i dont wanna waiste any time so bye. said green Okay ill see you around green next time we meet ill kick your ***. ^_^ said Blue we'll see about that Blue BYYE!!!
*green leaves*
NEEXT!!!!
*Blue walks into the lab*
hey Blue i dont have time to talk but here i wanted to give you this
*a blue fairy flys infront of Blue*
im navi and im your teacher so get ready for some ground rules:
I HATE BEING YELLED AT
I HATE HUMANS
AND I HATE WALKING

yeeaaaahh she's a handful... said Oak WHAT'D YOU SAY YOU OLD LADY!!! said navi i..i...i mean she's sooo beautiful <:] said Oak thats right lard *** dont mess with me!!!! well i think its time we start our journey navi. said Blue very well then Blue lets leave.
*navi and blue leave the lab and start traveling north*
so blue i thought first we will find you a weapon!!! said navi really!!!! ive allways wanted a real weapon!!!! remarked blue yes but then i realized your not ready so i made you this
*navi goes behind a bush and comes out with a wooden sword*
WHAT!?!?!? l:/ what am i supposed to do with this. asked Blue well... hit people are you ******** cuz if oak gave me to another mental ki... NO I WANT A REAL WEAPON!!! exclaimed Blue Oh okay fine ***** take this
*navi goes back behind the bush and pulls out a beam-pistol*
*blues eyes start to sparkle*
YES!!!! i love it!!! remarks Blue its good for close range and long range its a pistol but when you push this button.
*navi pushes the button on the beam pistol*
you get a beam sword. navi points out. COOL!!! even though this is a TOTAL rip-off from sin & punishment i LOVE it. Well the first town we go to is called Maroon Mushroom town so lets get going. says navi SOUNDS GREAT LETS GO!!!
and so our hero's continue their journey to become triforce hero's

 

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EPISODE 2: sidekicks and yellow bumps

okay so Blue i also figured we'd get you a sidekick. said navi OH you mean like a pokemon navi? asked blue yes exactly now around here in this route we can get these:
ratata
scyther charmander bulbasaur squirtle poliwag pidgey and pinsor's what do you want well a pidgey of coarse they can fly me around said blue very well then get behind a bush and we will wait
*Blue and navi go behind a bush and wait for an hour*
navi its not showing up im tired of waiting
*Blue gets up*
lets just keep moving
*a blue scyther appears*
oh look a scyther it sure cant fly but its strong stated navi very well then this bugs mine said Blue
*Blue and scyther glare at eachother*
*Blue starts to charge*
*scyther quickley dodges and rams Blue in her back*
"GASP"
USE YOUR BEAM GUN BLUE said navi i... dont want to."cough".. kill it said Blue you wont just stop right before you do said navi
*blue pulls out the beam gun and pushes the button*
zzing
*scyther charges once more*
*Blue dodges the ram*
*scyther turns and swings his left arm at Blue*
*Blue shoots out of fear of getting hit*
*the beam shot skinned the scythers cheek leaving a scar*
*scyther stops out of shock from beheading Blue*
you have won my respect i am yours Blue. scyther says yay so now what navi? we got a weapon and a sidekick where are we off to now? asked Blue same place stupid... do you seriouslly have to be
*BAAM blue hit navi with the handle of the beam blade*
im tired of you yapping jeez just shut the **** up!! exclaimed blue is she allways like this Blue? asked scyther yeah sigh... so we are off to maroon mushroom town
*our heroes finnally make it to maroon mushroom town*
FINNALLY!!! we are here said blue now what navi's asleep what do we do now... sighed scyther lets go to an inn and all get some rest its 9:00 pm anyways
*the trio walk over to the inn when in the corner of her eye Blue see's Yellow*
HIIII YELLOW!!!!! exclaimed Blue
*Blue runs over to her*
watcha doin hows training going along for ya? asked Blue oh hey Blue yeah my teacher left me stranded and said to figure **** on my own... so i decided to come out here for a smoke then im hittin the hay. oh... well that sucks im stayin here tonight also ^_^ sooo id ask you to spar with me but you dont seem to have a weapon. said blue OH i got weapons Bluey you wanna spare with me? asked yellow yeah would i ever i wont use scyther though... stated blue allright lets start!!!!!!
*blue and yellow glare into eachothers eyes*
*blue pulls out her beam pistol and pushes the button*
zzing
*yellow pulls out 2 drum sticks with blades on them*
*yellow charges to stab blue in the chest*
*Blue dodges and trips Yellow and puts the beam to her forehead*
*Yellow uses her drum sticks and moves Blues blade with them and gets up*
*Yellow backs up throws drum sticks at Blue and takes out a guitar*
*Blue dodges the sticks*
wow Bluey i sure as hell dident think you'd get this far on me but heads up cuz your about to sleep out here tonight >:] said Yellow
*Yellow runs up and started bashing Blue in the head with the guitar*
*Blue passes out*
*Blue wakes up with scyther sitting on her lap and navi on her shoulder*
HEY OH SHE'S UP!! exclaims navi are you okay? asked scyther yeah i guess man my head hurts said Blue Yellow left you a note on your forehead said scyther it says:
in order to spare you need blunt weapons hun sorry for the bumps but i gotta go SMELL YA LATER!!! <3 Yellow

WHAT THE HELL!!! screamed Blue shes dead. well we dont have time for her we gotta go to your 1st gym
*Blue got up and started walking*
to be continued...

 

[Suffered 20 Temple Matches.]

so....this is cross series Humomon. Intresting.



*You got a free bump!*

 

[LASHING_LEAF]

whats humomon? its accually just starting out so right now its only gone over a couple different game series and i do my best ^^ episode 3 2marrow its gonna be a looooonng series just to let you know ^_^

 

[Suffered 20 Temple Matches.]

Humans battle instead of Pokemaz,etc.

 

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OOOOHH and yeah the pokemanz will help out i accually had a hard time deciding over pidgey charmander and scyther and i want some art in here so people can see the characters and visualize them so far my favrite's Yellow lol such a bad ***

 

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i am back tonight i will continue blues journey if not sooner :]

 

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episode 3: IGGY 1st gym

tonight its on!!!

 

[-Final-]

You really need to change the way you organize this. I read the first chapter and hardly understood a word of it. Add Capital letters, periods, quotation marks, etc.

You might also want to add more details/ information. So far, the story seems a bit too bland, unchanging, and predictable.

Not trying to be mean here, just adding a bit of constructive criticism. I'll give you more advice when I can actually understand what's going on.

 

[LASHING_LEAF]

i give up final 63 made me mad i would like it if yall were to delete my account yall made me mad i will not be returning so there is no need to respond to this BYE!!!

 

[-Final-]

It's called constructive criticism. I'm trying to help you make your story better, not make you mad. >_>