Attempting some smash montage stuff, would seriously appreciate feedback :)

[kabaine]

Okay so I have put quite a bit of time into creating this, I still got a fair ways to go but I would love some feedback on this, I know that a tiny bit of it placeholder for another idea but yeah. I really hope you like the idea for this and I would love to hear what you think I can do to improve anything about this.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FUY943riE-I

 

[joltekz]

good stuff man, I really enjoyed that, maybe try to get rid of the black bars around the video excluding that this looks really nice to me goodluck!