Any Better?

[Dxt XXII]

A little while ago I placed some marth vids, and I got a lot of help and advice. So now I'm posting a new video, working on my (many, lol) flaws. So:


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UFmDAg8qiVg&feature=related - Old Video


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DTI3PgndANo - New Video


So is there any improvement, or do I still have to work out some things? Thanks in advance.

 

[Steel]

http://www.smashboards.com/showthread.php?t=197441

 

[takeurlife2]

needs more dodgerolling and taunts.
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[GPEternity]

your lucky the TL decided to rush you rather than beat you down with projectiles whenever you rolled away from him. Also lucky his approach sucks so you could abuse marth's excellent punishment game.

on that note, roll less.

at least make an attempt to edgeguard him, you just let him get back to the stage, and you could have gimped him easily on most of his recoveries, he DJ's close to the edge which leaves him open to an easy smash/dtilt off the side. He also threw something at you half the time, which you could have dropped under by going off the edge and coming at him with a fair. early on he up-b'd onto the stage, which is more free smash goodness. also, I could DI better than him, and my DI is pretty bad.

overall, not a good vid to judge by because he handed you the game

 

[Dxt XXII]

ok I obviously need a new vid...
sorry steel2nd, I was in a rush and didnt see that, when I get a better vid I'll post it there.