1st ever vid, Check it out...

[bboyspaz]

Hey guys, I was able to get my 1st ever vid of me playing and all. it'd be really cool if you guys could tell me how i'm doing and just check it out. i don't consider myself the greatest player ever, but you know i'm trying and such, so i'll post the link and you guys can check it out and such.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Iy6ondP0J1Y

 

[Bane]

Frankly the only real criticism is that you were too aggressive; you were playing Roy too close. To your credit, he did a good job of staying on top of you, but you ended up crumbling beneath Roy's superior close range game. Spam to high % and repeatedly n-air or d-air after a bomb-stun to kill him. Since you were so tight in on him and the battle was quick I really can't offer much constructive criticism. Your d-airs seemed a bit to common and evident, and they seemed to cost you as many stock as they gained you. Your skills seem excellent though, it's probably just a change in tactics thats in order. That's just my opinion though.

 

[L33teHaxor]

The video quality was really bad so I stopped watching about halfway cause my eyes were hurting, but hey we gotta work with what we've got right? Anyway from what I saw you were pretty good, Bane pretty much covered it, the only thing you really need to work on is short hopping, you full jumped a lot. Work on not using the Dair as much because it can make you too predictable, and can cause you some stocks which is what i saw happening.

 

[Tha L@wl]

Try to put a bit more Nairs in there because they are sooo useful for juggling...but everyone else covered the rest...good battle...

(didn't see the whole thing)