I guess I'm gonna be the critic ._. But some of these combos seemed, er, not essential. When I got to the 5th Falcon combo with the reverse bair and nair and stuff I was like "wut".
Also I know a lot of fighting games do this but because Smash combos are more situational thanks to DI/stage location (stage isn't just a box), I would probably point out general things you can do, like "Falcon can link any aerial into upsmash" (simple example). But I guess you can learn these things from watching this sort of video. IDK.
Don't get the wrong idea though, I really like what you're trying to do and we need more video guides in general.