0:32 Dont just illusion onto the stage like that. I know you werent punished for it, but if you were, you would have been in a whole world of hurt. Land penalty dawg. Sucks so much.
0:47 Dont just illusion onto the stage when the opponent is far away and when he is charging a move. You could have chose the better option which is just jumping onto the stage and doing a nair. That would have been safer, you wouldnt have gotten punished for it, and it just was a better option in general.
0:59 Wtf? Why illusion there? You were guaranteed a free grab right there. Always take a guaranteed option and that grab was it.
1:02 You had the right idea by punishing him when he was falling from his UpB. However it didnt hit till when he was on the ground, and he could have punished you for doing a dair but he didnt. Your hitbox isnt as big when you do a dair. It doesnt have the reach. It would have been better to nair him out of it. Again, free damage, and it resets you two back to neutral where you can shoot him with more lasers.
1:03 Despite you hitting you shielded afterwards and got punished for it. If you buffered in a grab you would have gotten it, or even a jab to grab. Also that DI. Where is it at? You went right into the side instead of going right into the corner.
Also it isnt always best to just triple laser. I know it's good but imo single laser is probably a lot safer. Especially when theyre around medium range. Mixing up retreating and approaching lasers, air dodges, and aerials will play well in yours or anyone's game.
1:11 You were given that free upsmash but you instead went for the uptilt. Oh well.
1:22 What was with that upsmash? He wasn't even in range, or even close.
1:23 You got hit with the nado. Next time, just keep holding shield. Depending on where they are and how high off the ground they are, punish them when theyre falling, or when theyre suffering from the nado's ending lag.
1:24 You saw MK retreating, but instead of dashing out of shield and upsmashing you uptilt'd OoS. In addition the MK was suffereing from the tornado's lag so you had enough time to punish him with an Upsmash but uptilted by mistake.
1:26 When MK is falling after an up B, when he touches the ground he pretty much has 0 lag, and falls insanely fast. Punish as soon as he cancels it in order to properly hit. Instead you upsmashed into the shield and got punished for it.
1:29 You missed an opportunity there to punish and kill him with an Upsmash OoS
1:40 I know he's at 100% and can easily be killed by an upsmash, but dont get desperate. Take your time, and look for a moment when you are guaranteed the kill. If your desperate for it, an opponent will just take advantage of that such as that free grab at 1:41. Upsmash has a lot of lag if it doesnt hit...So careful...
1:43 When MK dairs, you actually have enough time to jump up and land on him a free Uair because of Dair's cool down. It's pretty sweet.
1:44 Dont dair or throw out meaningless moves. That's just asking you to get punished. Each move should have meaning behind it. Why did you throw that out at that situation? Think about everything that your doing as the match happens. Brawl is a very stressing mental game...Seriously...
1:48 That airdodge to uptilt. good combination, but look at your opponent when you airdodge in. Don't have the mentality of Im going to do A then B. BAD!!! It should be I'm going to do A then depending on what he's doing I'm either going to do C, D,E, F ect. If he kept on holding shield, that would have been a free punish on you right there. In addition he could have also punished your airdodging as he just needs to have his grab hitbox over lap the couple of frames of landing lag that you recieve just from landing on the ground. Missed chance there on his part I suppose.
1:52 Pointless illusion there...you could have just landed. Be grateful he ran instead of punishing you with a Nair or an UpB.
1:53 He airdodged into the ground...That was a free upsmash right there. Know your opportunities.
1:57 How come you jumped and reflectored there? What was the purpose of doing that if you knew he was just going to have no lag and end up being right under you. In addition he punished you appropriately with that UpB. Free damage on his part.
2:02 Again, he ran away from the ledge and gave you a free chance to get back on, but you SideB'd onto the stage anyways. Atleast you got away with that.
Not going to go through that entire vid...too much work...2 minutes took a while to critique...
Also if your really just using a wii-mote, switch to something else. GC, Wiimote+Nunchuck, or Classic. Your limiting your technical abilities thus limiting the number of options that you have by sticking with the wiimote. The more options that you have available to you during a match the better. In this game, game knowledge, reading your opponent, knowing your options, knowing your opponent's options and deciding what the best thing to do in a situation depending on said options is what this game is made of.
Also...Wifi lololololololol
