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PikaMasterJesi

PikaMasterJesi

Smash Rookie 21 From Nookville, Lamina
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  • Zargasaurus
    Do you only have experience playing SSB4? or have you played any of the others?
    PikaMasterJesi
    PikaMasterJesi
    I've played every Smash game (64, Melee, Brawl, PM, SSB4), but I only really pursue SSB4 competitively. I just play the others for fun.
    ElectroLightning
    Hey there. I was thinking of making a Splatoon fanfiction, since you have more writing experience than me, could you help me out? I know this is out of the blue, but I'm desperate.
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    PikaMasterJesi
    PikaMasterJesi
    The first point looks fine if it's not overused, and the fourth one is fine, just as long as it doesn't get overused or used in such a way that it gets annoying. The second point seems fine to me, and I think it could make for some good personality and/or character developing. That one, you might want to use a bit more.
    ElectroLightning
    ElectroLightning
    Thanks. My main problem with the characters are that they seem too overused. I would compare Fisk with Sokka from Avatar, and I'm sure I could compare other characters in my fan fiction with characters from Avatar. Now, do you want backstory or a different character?
    PikaMasterJesi
    PikaMasterJesi
    Either backstory or a new character works for me. By "they seem too overused", do you mean their traits or the characters themselves? If it's for traits, it's a lot like what I said above: if it isn't annoying and is executed well, it should be fine. But with characters, it's fine to focus on one or two a little more than others, just so long as they don't attention hog the entire thing.
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