Critique Please

[TheFuture]

http://www.twitch.tv/gameunderground/b/595752291 Match starts at 43:37 Just turn off volume the commentary is super bias

Hey just went to a tourney a couple days ago and I want to see if there's anything you guys can think I can improve on.
(I'm the fox play obviously) BTW is there a thread where I can ask for help?

 

[Animage]

your video is gone
also this is the critique thread: http://smashboards.com/threads/fox-video-thread.332099/
though it's been inactive for a while, if you find another video to post i'll critique for you (if i can)