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WWYP 6 -- Exercise Your Mind

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Welcome back, writers! And it's good to be back. We're on the sixth major writing contest, and this time: No Scav! Yay! The JUDGES for WWYP6 are Virgilijus, Tom, and myself.

Here is your prompt (courtesy Blackadder):
Write a story in which some character, minor or major, is affected by a psychological disorder or trauma. Even if you choose to make the character minor, his/her influence must be a major driving force in the story. This is fairly broad, so your choice disorder could be something from schizophrenia to communication issues caused by shoddy parenting to being a **** vitcim. Psychological nuance is key to this prompt, so thoughtfulness as well as research is important for this exercise.



Adherence to Prompt -5 points
Virgilijus - How interwoven is your story to the guidelines? If the prompt were a genre, could some one read it and instantly know the prompt was fantasy or satire? If they can, you followed it well. If not, you avoided it too much. Also, the prompt should be well utilized: a story that requires a mythical object should use it for all its potential worth, not merely mention it and check it off the list.

Matt - These points should be easy to earn. How well did you engage the guidelines? Did you engage them creatively? Did you engage them with your power? If I ask you to use a gun in your story, will you give me knife? Take risks, but don't disregard our basic expectations.


Tone - 5 pts
Virgilijus - The overall mood of the story; the feeling that you get when you read it. This is made up by the setting, characters, dialogue, and the imagery. Unless it is directed by the prompt, the tone for each story should be different, but they should all impact the reader. A good tone should get the reader immersed in the story, whether or not it is from blissful country sides or horrifying mad men. How real is your story in the readers mind?

Scav - Tone is made up of character (do your characters seem real? do they talk real? are they interesting), setting (Does your story have a sense of place? Of time? Are we always oriented?) and imagery (can we see what's going on?)


Style - 5 pts
Virgilijus - This is what separates your story from others of the same plot. How do you describe people, actions, and places? What rhythm do your words have? How quickly do you move the plot? Style is your paintbrush to show why your painting of little girl is different and more powerful than some one else’s.

Scav - The most technical of the categories. Did you use proper spelling and grammar? Did you try to push the envelope with your sentence structure? Did you construct the plot in a significant manner? This category relies heavily on phrasing and specifics.


Enjoyment - 5 pts
Virgilijus - Enjoyment is the immediate and long lasting appeal of your story. While we were reading it, was it a page turner? After we finished, did we sit and think about the theme or the final scene? Is your story an accomplishment, or just words with a beginning, middle and end?

Matt - An enjoyable story brings plot elements and theme and, frankly, everything listed above together in a way that is both memorable and engaging. We're talking about the WOW factor here, and these types of points aren't easy to earn.

To the judges: using half points is encouraged!

RULES:

* Story must be between 1000-5000 words (penalty for going over or under will be whatever each judge deems fit, taken from Adherence to Prompt)
* Contest begins November 24th and ends one month later (December 24th) at midnight central time.
* No need to sign up! Simply create a new topic with the tagline [WWYP6] in front of it. For example: [WWYP6] - The Story of why Scav Sucks
* You have until the deadline to edit the story as you see fit, but your topic will be locked at midnight on December 24th to prevent last minute changes.
* Profanity is allowed! If you don't know how to censor dodge, pm one of the judges and he'll explain it to you.
* The judges have exactly TWO weeks after the contest ends to pick their favorites! Results will be posted by the January 7th.
* No plagiarizing, of course. If you do, you may be banned as well as disqualified.
* You can only submit stories that have not already been published and even those that are unpublished. The idea is to write something new!
* One entry allowed per person.
* Judges cannot enter the contest.
* Judges absolutely cannot read or discuss any contest topic (whether amongst themselves or with contestants) until August 12th!
* ABSOLUTELY NO FAN FICS
* Write with your power.


PRIZES:
1st Place -- Custom Title, Custom Avatar, New Member Group ID (Smash Writer), WWYP Icon below name, Judging/prompt rights in the next contest
2nd Place -- Custom Title, New Member Group ID (Smash Writer), WWYP Icon below name
3rd Place -- New Member Group ID (Smash Writer), WWYP Icon below name
 

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I love this prompt

And you posted this so early
 

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I like the prompt for this WWYP..Hmm my brain shall begin its scattered showers.
 

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Awesome prompt. What exactly counts as a "psychological disorder" in this regard? Any nervous system condition that affects thought processes?
 

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Yay for the prompt.

I love this prompt

And you posted this so early
I like the prompt for this WWYP..Hmm my brain shall begin its scattered showers.
Awesome prompt. What exactly counts as a "psychological disorder" in this regard? Any nervous system condition that affects thought processes?
Another great prompt!

I might hit close to home with my story, or try something else. It's still gonna blow minds no matter what!!!!:psycho:
Wow, I didn't think my prompt would be seriously used. But I'm glad people seem to like the idea of it. Here's hoping the stories that come in are really interesting!
:)

Oh, joy! Insanity is my specialty!
I noticed that some time ago Xsyven. :p
 

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[WWYP6] - The Story of why Scav Sucks

Can I use this? >_>

EDIT: I think Wobbles cheats. <_< >_> <_<
 

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I think so, Scav.

It does kind of traumatize you and everyone around you mentally.

edit// and physically.
 

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Perfect timing, I'm studying psychological disorders in my General Psych class right now. Be very scared.
 

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Oh man guys. My autobiography will take first prize here.

Okay, just one question: What are these stories rated? For example, is sex, swearing, drugs, etc. out?
 

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No, there's a rule that states that swearing is fine.

I assume Drugs and sex would be fine to. How else can you Write With Your Power! Wheeee!
 

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Awesome prompt. What exactly counts as a "psychological disorder" in this regard? Any nervous system condition that affects thought processes?
Well, most psychological disorders aren't like that, they don't have a detectable physical difference in the brain (though chemical imbalances cause some), though Schizophrenia is a notable exception in that you can just do a certain type of scan and a schizophrenic's brain will be different.

Also, whoever says someone with Multiple Personality Disorder is Schizophrenic should fail.

I guess you guys can use this for inspiration: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_mental_illnesses

Though some of the things on there may not be commonly accepted as "mental illnesses," they are, and I think they should be for the purposes of this contest.

I don't have any ideas for the prompt yet, though.
 

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Well, most psychological disorders aren't like that, they don't have a detectable physical difference in the brain (though chemical imbalances cause some), though Schizophrenia is a notable exception in that you can just do a certain type of scan and a schizophrenic's brain will be different.
Without bringing spirituality into this, I would debate that. Technically every psychological illness has some physiological basis since our brain is a biological entity, whether it's a genetic predisposition or screwed up neurotransmitter levels or problems with synaptic plasticity, or in the case of most of the famous ones like autism or OCD, something we haven't figured out yet. Just because we don't see any physical differences now doesn't mean there aren't any. Your example of schizophrenia detection through brain scans is a great example of how the cause of a condition once thought of merely as purely "psychological" is being narrowed down to more biological roots after further study and better technology.

Though some of the things on there may not be commonly accepted as "mental illnesses," they are, and I think they should be for the purposes of this contest.
That's why I wondered what would count, because some conditions definitely affect the individual in psychological ways but aren't thought of as mainstream "mental illnesses". So would a story about somene with a phantom limb be allowed? Or neglect syndrome? Or autism?

I think this prompt's great, which is why I'd like to know what will count so I don't disqualify myself for not getting the rules straight.
 

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That's why I used the word "detectable."

Plus, many mental illnesses really do seem to have purely social causes, like Narcissistic Personality Disorder. Yes, experience affects brain physciology, it's not like it'll be stored somewhere else, but if things like "overindulgence and overevaluation by parents" classify as "nervous conditions which affect thought process" then the prompt would mean "write a story about a person."
 

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That's why I used the word "detectable."
Ah, missed that, sorry. I think my question's still unanswered, though. In the end, aren't mental illnesses recognized through abnormal/unusual thought processes and/or behaviors? Can we write about anything (I'd like to use something biological) that would lead to those in a character?

Just so I don't give the wrong impression, I'm not trying to make trouble by these arguments. I'd just like to try writing about something lesser used than dementia or autism or PTSD (like neglect syndrome or apraxia). But I guess if it's causing confusion I can stick to the tired old mainstream ones.

Plus, many mental illnesses really do seem to have purely social causes, like Narcissistic Personality Disorder. Yes, experience affects brain physciology, it's not like it'll be stored somewhere else, but if things like "overindulgence and overevaluation by parents" classify as "nervous conditions which affect thought process" then the prompt would mean "write a story about a person."
Everyone is exposed to social pressures or environmental stimuli, but not everyone gets NPD or anorexia or chronically depressed or dangerously addicted to something. The neurological processes in those individuals' brains, as well as their previous experiences (which come back to affect their brains physically), come together to make them react differently enough for others to say that they have a disorder.
 

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I think it's safe to say that you can use lesser known mental disorders.

And are you sure that not everyone can get NPD if exposed to the conditions that seem to cause it? Or even what the conditions are that predispose someone to NPD?
 

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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Disorder_of_written_expression

Lolol. I think this is why scav cant get his scores done.
Woah... I think I have something sort of like that. Well, actually it's nothing like that, but it reminded me of what I do have.

While I'm a fine writer, I just can't get school things onto paper. Every single school paper is a horrific nightmare for me. Seriously, whenever we have a 5 page paper, it'll take me 30 hours when you count the time I spend staring at the screen.

For some reason it's only with school stuff. That's why I think it's a strange psychological disorder instead of something like dyslexia.
 

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And are you sure that not everyone can get NPD if exposed to the conditions that seem to cause it? Or even what the conditions are that predispose someone to NPD?
I'm not a mental disorder specialist, and I suspect even specialists will have trouble being 100% sure about anything because there're always exceptions, and then you have to wonder what those exceptions do to your rules. But I'm of the opinion that up to a certain point, if you take a fair sample of people and expose them to a social pressure, you'll get varying reactions. Not everyone exposed to the same stimuli will respond in the same way, but often when they do, it's because they have a common biological reason to.

Anyway, I'll think on a condition that's lesser known but perhaps more easily recognizable as a mental disorder.
 

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And are you sure that not everyone can get NPD if exposed to the conditions that seem to cause it? Or even what the conditions are that predispose someone to NPD?
I'm not a mental disorder specialist, and I suspect even specialists will have trouble being 100% sure about anything because there're always exceptions, and then you have to wonder what those exceptions do to your rules. But I'm of the opinion that up to a certain point, if you take a fair sample of people and expose them to a social pressure, you'll get varying reactions. Not everyone exposed to the same stimuli will respond in the same way, but often when they do, it's because they have a common biological reason to.
NPD is a personality disorder not commonly treated by medication. A biological cause for it has not yet been isolated. That doesn't mean there isn't one, but there are some very specific environmental factors that most people with NPD have been exposed to, which seems to indicate an environmental cause to that disorder. One biological factor though, could be emotional oversensitivity expressed from birth. It is not a cause because it does not automatically result in NPD, but it may contribute to the disorder.

However, just because NPD does not seem to have a biological root, that is not to say that other disorders are the same. Mental illnesses are divided into different classifications. Like schizoprenia, anxiety disorders are directly related to biochemical imbalances in the brain. Depression, anxiety and OCD are all classified as anxiety disorders and are all treated by medication. Personality disorders like NPD and anti-social personality tend not to have known biological causes, but other disorders of different classifications (such as psychotic or anxiety disorders) may be rooted in biology. As a general rule, anything treated successfully by medication will have a biological cause; disorders for which medication has not been effective either are caused by environmental factors or have a biological cause that is not yet known.
 

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As a general rule, anything treated successfully by medication will have a biological cause; disorders for which medication has not been effective either are caused by environmental factors or have a biological cause that is not yet known.
Agreed; there definitely seem to be initiating factors that arise more from environment than biology in certain disorders. Still, I think nothing is purely environmental (or purely biological, though since we're ultimately sacks of communicating cells, there has to be some biological component to it).

It's the circle of insanity!
 

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Or, we could just be creative and make up our own mental disorders.

*drinks bleach and streaks*
 

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Unless you've experienced them (or had a family member who did), I'd stay away from the trio of schizophrenia, bipolar disorder and multiple personality disorder. It will be very difficult for you to bring something new to the story, or to provide insight beyond a hollywood portrayal of "omg crazy."

A lot can be done with other common mental disorders (depression, anorexia, Alzheimer's, ocd). Ocd actually opens a lot of doors, if you do it well.

But here's the thing: if your story is "about" mental illness, you are going to have a very difficult time making it good. A story about an anorexic girl who is really hungry but wait can't eat she's so fat (she dies) is far less interesting than, for instance, a thirty year old woman who is taking care of her ailing father but hasn't noticed that she's stopped eating.

If you choose a more exotic disorder, do your research. Read The Man Who Mistook His Wife for a Hat, or find some websites written by people living with the disorder.

Sometimes, it can be a plot driver. Look at the movie Insomnia, or Identity, even Memento.

And, of course, there's One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest.

Required reading:
"The Yellow Wallpaper" by Charlotte Perkins Gilman. You will be able to reference this story in a surprising number of discussions, ranging from women's rights to how we treat mental illness.

Notes to My Biographer by Adam Haslett. This is a wonderful story about manic depression (bipolar disorder). If you pick up his collection, You Are Not a Stranger Here, you'll find a lot of expert depictions of mental illness. "Notes to My Biographer" is a great example of how to use an ailment as characterization without smothering the story.

For Alzheimer's, "My Father's Brain" from Jonathan Franzen's How To be Alone has a vivid depiction.

For Anorexia, read Jay McInerny's Model Behavior. It's short, and if you like Lad Lit you'll enjoy it. I mean hey, the narrator has sex with models and it has an angsty writer adonis. What's not to like?

That's all I've got for now. Back to researching... oh wait, I can't tell you guys yet ;)
 

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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Disorder_of_written_expression

Lolol. I think this is why scav cant get his scores done.
Handorin, looking back on all your previous entries (including those promised and then john'd out of existence), I would think that someone besides Scav has that disorder. From the title of your upcoming entry, it looks like your pattern of not only barely fitting the prompt but also just plain sucking stays true.

Please take the contest seriously; I look forward to being impressed by your effort this time.
 

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Wow, pawned. *high fives Tom*

Scav still puts a buttload of effort into his judging (when they're finally released) and his posts in the WWYP subforums, and it's really evident to how much time he spent trying to be a good judge.

lol i sux at riting
 

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*sigh* It was actually going to be a great (fictional) story, that tell about his mother developing Alzheimers (sp?) disease and how he has to take care of her more. This leads the members on SWF to believe he "sucks" because he is not very punctual in his postings.

Now that my idea has been shot down, it is time to rethink.
 

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If it was anyother name than Scav, he probably wouldnt have said anything.
 

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If it was anyother name than Scav, he probably wouldnt have said anything.
... Funny how you can have a civilized AIM conversation with me over this very subject, and then come back onto the forums and take a shot at me. :x

I've always appreciated how WWYP is a writing contest in which members of the swf community participate, instead of a writing contest concerning swf. Call me selfish, but I just didn't want to see that change.
 

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Seriously, If I just wrote about any guy who was late for X deadline/event, you wouldnt have said anything.

I am changing my story though, so be happy.
 

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*drinks bleach and streaks*
*Drinks Windex to stop streaking*

>_>

<_<

Anyways, Hand, if you are going to enter this time put some more effort into it. These contests are around to help you gain experience and get critiques from better writers. The thing is if you don't try it's all for naught. No tongue twisters this time :)
 

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I'm going to try this time, no johns. I'll start on Wednesday after my English paper is done.

And if I wrote the whole thing as a tounge twister, that would be amazing. I'd imagine it would be hard to do as well >_>
 
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