DQ'ed [WWYP5] - Pure wonder

Yo at everyone.
I didn't follow the rules close enough with this one, so just… ignore this thread.
Erm, if it was possible, I'd delete this thread, but I don't know how.
Sorry for my complete lack of competence to follow rules.

You poor, poor misdirected creature. I'm pretty sure I'm right about this. The promt was to make a story about a character that is not present. Someone mentioned cliffhangers, but that was not the promt. So basicly, this story is doomed. Sorry .

Also, the story ,ust be at least a thousand words.

Anyway, if I am wrong about this, than I'll say what I thought.

I thought the idea was cute, yet prestented the wrong way. You didn't spend enough time on, say... the tornado part. You didn't enphisize enough. And although the promt wasn't best cliff hanger, this just wasn't great. You just didn't make me care whether or not the boy got his balloon or not. Good concept, but done wrong.

Sorry about all this bad news, but at least now you know.

http://smashboards.com/showthread.php?t=108344 has all the rules and regulations

MOTHER****ING *****ES ********!!

...nah, I'm cool with it.
I knew I forgot something.
Well, no what? I' honestly not to bothered with this. Hmmm.
Maybe I'll just edit it all, and try again.
But no matter, **** happens.
Thank you for your help (: