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[withdrawn] Heart-Shaped Box

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pokemonmaster01

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Well I didn't finish on time. It's midnight here, but even if I have another hour or so due to time zones I'm not going to get done. I'm withdrawing my entry so I can finish it the right way because I have a halfway decent story started here I think. Good luck to the rest of you.
 

Xsyven

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I kind of hate you for not posting the entire thing all at once. Now I have to wait until the fifth to finish it.

But really-- awesome intro. Peaked my interest immediately. It forced me to keep reading... which I'm glad I did. I just hate the fact that it's not finished yet.
 

technomancer

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Could be the winrar with some minor touch-ups. I'd like to see how it relates to the song, though.
 

Evil Eye

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This WWYP is about capturing the essence, not the ostensible plot.

Poke, I love you and your writing as per usual. I may offer better comments at a later date/on AIM, but usually my only criticism of your stuff is that you write stuff that is understated but flawless. So uh, be more risky.

I have to re-read this before deciding if that advice corresponds to this piece.
 

OnYourMark

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Is it true that if you don't finish, you get banned?





Temporarily, o'course.

EDIT: It's difficult to detect sarcasm on the internet.
EDIT2: PM01, I hope you complete your story, making it the best it can be.
 
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