Sonic's Story- The Subspace Emissary as told by Sonic the Hedgehog

[Cenedar]

Hey there everybody! My name is Cenedar and this is my first post here in Creative Minds. I have been brewing ideas for a story like this for a while now, and I want to see what y'all think. As I'm sure you can tell, this story will be told mostly through the eyes of Sonic the Hedgehog and his experiences in fighting the Subspace Emissary. Warning to all now, this WILL contain spoilers to the SSE story, but mostly this is a plot of my own design. And now, without further delay, here is my story. Enjoy!

Prologue​

Darkness. It was the only word one could find to describe the realm in which he ruled. Oh sure, one could see different shades and hues melt into the deep black of the area around them, almost as if color itself was being taken in from the outside world and twisted and bent in ways nature had not intended. But for the most part, it was dark. Deep, crushing darkness that would break even the most steeled of hearts.

And yet, as he floated through this realm of eternal night, he acted as a sort of beacon, glowing a bright blue amidst the dark purples of the world which he watched over. With an eerily quiet voice, he spoke to seemingly nobody.

“Come here, my servant.”

From the darkness came a sight to behold. The creature was naught but a single white glove, moving as if a hand were inside, giving it life. It “bowed” respectfully and responded to the call.

“What is your whim, Master Taboo?”

The glowing man turned his back and began to float away, the giant hand following cautiously. He cleared his throat and spoke.

“These peons no longer amuse me as they once did. Tell your man Ganondorf to set my plan in motion.” The Master Hand stumbled at that.

“But sir! The Subspace bombs are still in the experimental stage and…” Five ropes of energy flew forth from the man’s hand, pinning the Master Hand to the floor. Amidst his blue glow, one could see that his smile had dropped slightly, a now foul looking sneer masking his incandescent face.

“Then this will be the perfect opportunity to test them out. Now don’t question my orders again or you will suffer my… displeasure.” He released the hand from its bonds and continued to float on.

It was a few minutes of painful silence before the Master Hand spoke again. “My lord, what should we do with the scientist then? I mean if we’re done working on the bombs then…”

Taboo stopped where he was, making the Master Hand instantly silence himself.

“Ah yes, the good doctor… Let’s have some fun, shall we? I think I shall make him another puppet of mine and set him loose in his home world. Perhaps he will provide me with the entertainment I need.”

He waved off the Master Hand and continued to float on, disappearing into the crushing black oblivion of Subspace…







I'll have the first chapter up later today. In the meantime, tell me what y'all think!

 

[kr3wman]

Pretty Good, although I can't really judge how the overall feel the story would have.

I'll be reading!

 

[NeptunerAV]

Keep goin with this!

I love Brawl Stories =X

 

[Cenedar]

Chapter 1- Sonic's f***ing Bad Day

Sonic the Hedgehog was not happy.

Not that he didn’t have reason of course. Actually his whole day had started off with a foul mood. First and foremost, as he was tying his trusty running shoes, one of the buckles broke. IT BROKE.

That was never, EVER anything but a sign for Sonic that he was in for a day from hell.

But, despite his better judgment telling him to stay indoors and out of potential danger, he grabbed one of his many spare pairs of running shoes and with an irritated growl tossed out his ruined ones in the garbage, bolting out the door.

He hadn’t even realized how fast he was really running until, almost as if in some sort of trance, he ran head on into the wall of Tails’ workshop. Hearing a loud THUD, the two tailed fox had proceeded to run out in a panic before finally peeling Sonic off the solid brick wall.

“Bad day coming, eh?”

“Shut up Tails.”

“I knew it.”

Sonic had barely been sitting in Tails’ garage for two minutes when the TV station cut to the news, covering what appeared to be yet ANOTHER Eggman robot attack on Station Square. Normally Sonic would not be so concerned about such an occurrence, as they happened far too often for his liking anyway.

However, once the camera cut to a shot of one Amy Rose in the cold steel grip of said Eggman machine, Sonic decided that his concern was indeed QUITE necessary. It was another strange instance about how Amy’s safety got him riled up without him even knowing why.

Tails knew why. He brought up this fact to Sonic frequently, to which Sonic usually responded with one of the following retorts.

“Get your head out of dreamland, buddy boy.”

“You’ve finally snapped.”

Or Tails’ personal favorite, “Screw off.”

But I’m getting sidetracked.

Sonic sped off to the city center without a moment’s hesitation, fully prepared to release his ire on the good doctor for once again ruining his day. He arrived on the scene, jumping over several chunks of rubble and torn up pavement, coming face to face with what looked like yet ANOTHER generic giant robot Eggman cooked up for the sole purpose of pissing Sonic off.

Unfortunately for the good doctor, his plan worked.

Sonic ignored Amy’s screams as she pounded against the metal fist that held her with her hammer, with a high spinning tackle managed to break its grip, grabbed the girl, jumped back down to the street and before Amy could so much as get out an “Oh!” he was back in the air, coming down on the robot’s head with a diving kick.

Needless to say, the lack of attention left Amy more than a tad indignant.

“Sonic the Hedgehog! Get back here right-EEK!”

She just barely managed to jump aside as the robot’s head came flying in her direction. The cockpit shield hissed and released, pathetically breaking off the top of the robot head, and before the good Doctor Eggman could so much as sneeze, Sonic was there, grabbing him roughly by the collar.

“Today is NOT a good day to be doing this! You’re going BACK to prison and if I have to see your face again today I will go Super Sonic all over your fat, useless psycho a… ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING!?”

Eggman was silent, it was only then that Sonic noticed that the doctor didn’t move at all, no writhing or attempt to escape or anything, he just hung limply by the grip Sonic had on his collar. “Don’t play possum with me, Eggman! Answer me or I’ll… HOLY SH…”

Sonic dropped the fat doctor upon removing his glasses, to find his eyes completely blank and white. He was alive, definitely, but nobody was home, so to speak.

Sonic found a small note attached to Eggman’s dashboard. He picked it up and it contained a bunch of symbols he didn’t recognize, and a single message below them.

“Courtesy of Tabuu. I hope you enjoyed your little game with Eggman.”

Sonic dropped the note just as Amy appeared behind him, ready to tear into him until she saw Eggman herself.

“Sonic, what…”

“I don’t know… Amy, call Tails. I have some research I need him to do.”

 

[JustKindaBoredUKno]

awesome. keep it coming!

 

[TheKingofDes]

yeah im just going to pretend that this happened in the subspace storyline because sonic really just comes out of nowhere and thats weak , but nice story XD

 

[SuperLinkBrothers]

nice ending, good suspense : )

well Ill wait for the next chapter, seeing that no one is responding to my story anymore. Probably cuz I left for a month, but whatever.

Keep up the good work, im not really a fan of sonic(anymore) but this is an interesting story.

 

[WoapGang]

Bring the story on! I love it so far

 

[Deleted member]

Keep it up!

 

[SonicMario]

Great. But I'm not sure at all why Tails and Amy needed to appear. It could have been only Sonic and Eggman.

There weren't any supporting characters for each franchise and I just don't get that.

What'd I'd personally do for Sonic's part in the SSE is have him fight Eggman and to include the other 3 that didn't have a role. Have Sonic save Jigglypuff or Toon Link from Eggman. And maybe Wolf would come out with a trophy gun later.

Also, this story seems deeper then the Subspace Emissiary actually is though. But that's okay.

 

[Leahdybug]

I can almost read your story ,only cause its just the beginning , please dont for the love of god do an amy sonic love thing.Also are you keeping to sonics character or doing your own thing because even when sonics pissed he doesnt go into major cursing fits. He cocky with out doing much at all including when hes mad.

Other than that your idea is interesting so far but can easily be made into a fan boy/girl fic if your not careful. (if your into that thats cool but people stray from the character hard core when they do that)

 

[Deleted member]

^^How about a Sonic-Tingle love thing?XD

 

[Leahdybug]

^^How about a Sonic-Tingle love thing?XD

It wont just let me put lol but lol

 

[Shinxsu]

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! "BEnt colors as nature had not intended....." (sweet description)

 

[ZonictheHedgehog]

Great job so far. You made Tails a little more aggressive than normal, but otherwise good.

In my remake, Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles are staring up at the stadium as it gets engulfed. Sonic then dashes away, leaving Tails and Knuckles behind.

Later on, he's running through a forest when he sees Jigglypuff getting cornered by Primids. He homing attacks them and kills them all quickly, and then he and Jigglypuff start going together through the forest. Eventually they come to a clearing with th entrance to a ruin guarded by ROBs. They destroy them and are about to enter the ruin when Eggman in a huge machine confronts them, laughing maniacally. Sonic leaps up to destroy it, but Eggman shoots a trophy arrow and turns Sonic into a trophy. Jigglypuff then faces it alone, destroys it, , and Eggman takes off in his Egg mobile. Jigglypuff reawakens Sonic, and they enter the ruin.

Fast-forward to Lucas and the Pokemon Trainer. They've just defeated Galleom and are falling to their death when, instead of Meta Knight, it's Sonic and Jigglypuff who catch them in mid-air, landing next to Marth's party. They continue along in the storyline as a part of Marth's party.

Other ideas I've had was to make Link fall under some kind of spell that turns him into toon form, and Zelda tries to reverse it but fails. Then something happens to change him back but they keep the magic that turned him into the toon, so he can become a toon during one adventure and normal Link during the next. Kind of like in Twilight Princess with becoming a wolf. But you can only choose Link or Toon Link, you can't be both .

Wolf could have been a mercenary that fights them for a while and keeps popping in and out at random parts of the storyline, but eventually decides to help them when he learns what's going on.

 

[ZonictheHedgehog]

Okay... forget about everything I said up there. Just keep writing.

 

[Thunda-Moo]

Yes, it was very good. But I'll also jump on the suggestion bandwagon becasue I have nothing better to do.

I would make Sonic Tabuu's henchman, becasue Tabuu would have a hostage like, say, Amy or Tails or something in order to force him onto obaying. Maybe the hostage would be Jigglypuff for comedic effect. I like comedic effect. Anyway, Sonic would go around spreading shadow bugs, fighting with Mario & Co., and otherwise being a general nucance to the heros but not liking it. In the final battle with Tabuu, Sonic would realize that his only chance would be now, so he cripple's Tabuu's wings of death or whatever they are in a final attempt to stop Tabuu once and for...

Aw, heck. this is your story, not mine. What's my problem? Oh yeah, the bandwagon.

Anyway, your story is totally awesome too, so keep writing it however you want!