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I came back on Smashboard and crazy ton of thing have been since my two day without internet, i also do two draw at school and for the first time in my life, i written a song that i created alone, thank to the beautiful opening of Pandora Hearts and that i consider as the "Opening" of my show (If one day he ever come a Anime #BELIEVE). That i can share with you and all the other if you want.
Maybe you could try remaking it to correct errors you might have made before showing it to us. It would be better for you and everyone who'll see your work I think. It's always good to remake your creations to correct mistakes.
Maybe you could try remaking it to correct errors you might have made before showing it to us. It would be better for you and everyone who'll see your work I think. It's always good to remake your creations to correct mistakes.
My sister as already correct my fault (Even tough i don't demand to her but oh well.). So yeah, but since it's the first i ever written a song. I don't really know it is good or not, but my sister say it's good, so i guess i could share if you want of course.
My sister as already correct my fault (Even tough i don't demand to her but oh well.). So yeah, but since it's the first i ever written a song. I don't really know it is good or not, but my sister say it's good, so i guess i could share if you want of course.
Well, phooey! I won't be able to watch either the Smash stream or Nintendo Digital Event live thanks to work.
Sigh... Well, at least there's something to look forward to right after I come home (as long as I don't view any sites that spoil them for me before I watch the videos).
OK! But just before that, i recommend you to have this song when reading it.
It's not obligatory, but since this song as give me the inspiration for my song. I think it's better to imagine how i keep with the idea, but stop the Bla-Bla. The song!
- The Chains of the Past
Keep me in the lie....
When you, have get no choice....
To go without me!
- I rested in the darkness.
Thinking they were my friend.
But i was lying.... to my heart.
Being without you, i can't advence alone.
I was too afraid of the future....
But you have taken my hand.
And it's when you bathed me in your light.
That my fear goes like tears of joy.
Togehter, we will break our chains.
That are keeping us in the dark of our fault.
And we will advence, to a new day.
Where, like before, we can truly smiles!
OK! But just before that, i recommend you to have this song when reading it.
It's not obligatory, but since this song as give me the inspiration for my song. I think it's better to imagine how i keep with the idea, but stop the Bla-Bla. The song!
- The Chains of the Past
Keep me in the lie....
When you, have get no choice....
To go without me!
- I rested in the darkness.
Thinking they were my friend.
But i was lying.... to my heart.
Being without you, i can't advence alone.
I was too afraid of the future....
But you have taken my hand.
And it's when you bathed me in your light.
That my fear goes like tears of joy.
Together, we will break our chains.
That are keeping us in the dark of our fault.
And we will advence, to a new day.
Where, like before, we can truly smiles!
One thing you could add, a very french tip that I'm giving you here, is rhymes. They make the text more complex, but sounds better, thus giving the song more value.
One thing you could add, a very french tip that I'm giving you here, is rhymes. They make the text more complex, but sounds better, thus giving the song more value.
Yeah i know that my text miss some rhymes but my idea wasn't enough for making sound the all better with still have the same song like i imagined. But still, thank you for feedback!This also not the full song but i have already idea for the full "Opening", if i should say.Keep waiting for the rest!
Well, phooey! I won't be able to watch either the Smash stream or Nintendo Digital Event live thanks to work.
Sigh... Well, at least there's something to look forward to right after I come home (as long as I don't view any sites that spoil them for me before I watch the videos).
The current incarnation is the worst of the lot. They're using Flash animation of all things.
I wasn't a fan of the Tom & Jerry Tales version either. A lot of gags and plots felt recycled to fit the modern setting, and there was often too much dialogue going on. But at least the animation was good enough to recreate the feel of the old cartoons. Instead of... Flash.