Need a bit of criticism

[Haxor]

Well, i made a vertex, and I need to know how to make it better.
And yes, it is a overrated character im sure you know that i am associated with.

New vertex, new pic
The spines, the bracelets, and the chest fur was edited.
The hair is like that because of some of sonic's chest animations, its not really noticeable in game.

 

[Segtendo]

It's about time someone vertexed Shadow's chest hair.
I give it a thumbs up

 

[OizenX]

Shoes
filler

 

[Haxor]

It's about time someone vertexed Shadow's chest hair.
I give it a thumbs up

Other people thought that too, but thanks.

Shoes
filler

Black text doesnt work here buddy.

 

[OizenX]

w/e its just due to the lame 10 char limit.

fix the shoes.

 

[highfive]

I'd say the chest hair is somewhat triangulated but vertex hacking can only do so much. I'd recommend smoothing out his hair but I have zilch experience with vertex hacking so I'm guessing that what you've done is amazing. I'm basing this off the opinion that Sonic's bone structure seems completely ******** to me.

 

[Haxor]

Ok, fix shoes and fix hair.
Now, actual work time.

 

[OizenX]

Why is he so shiny?

 

[Haxor]

Because i like it that way :3

 

[rPSIvysaur]

Why is he so shiny?

He's a vampire from twilight.

 

[Haxor]

He's a vampire from twilight.

If vampires were shiny they would have used oil instead of glitter.

 

[Segtendo]

If vampires were shiny they would have used oil instead of glitter.

Oh god, the image I'm getting...

 

[Haxor]

TrololololololololololololololoDONE.