Kirby mains please critique

[Snack2King]

I am looking to improve. If you are a kirby main then let me know.

My set with Kage The Warrior

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLvP9u-OGcYdcEzXxhor2f20SCOXamkk62

My friendlies with n0ne

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLvP9u-OGcYdedsb2eYLHziT4xxLXHSPW_

 

[Ministry]

i dont think this is none, it looks nothing like his falcon.

and you would of showed something on net play to show it was him.

i apologize in advance if im wrong.

 

[Snack2King]

i dont think this is none, it looks nothing like his falcon.

and you would of showed something on net play to show it was him.

i apologize in advance if im wrong.

You should ask him. He will verify its him. It's Netplay. Netplay sometimes doesn't take a person's inputs due to the Lag. He's in Canada and I am in Florida. There will be miss inputs. That is why it doesn't seem like his Falcon.

 

[Plunder]

Yea if that was n0ne it was clear he was trolling or he was just in full on YOLO mode. I wouldn't give any critique on those since it basically looked like you were playing a lvl 9 CPU.

I'll watch the Kage sets and give feedback, so far it seems like you have good fundementals/spacing and you know what moves to use where. Although you rely WAY too much on swallow, that stuff will not work on anyone that is good and actually playing seriously.

 

[Cereal Rabbit]

I really don't like the fact that it's Netplay. You're getting away with a lot of things that you shouldn't be in neutral. I really don't want to dish out any kind of advice other than to record matches in person with whoever you can accessibly play.

Sorry man, frame rates, netplay, and limited player IQ makes it really hard for me to give advice.