I'm going to be honest with you, and I don't mean to insult you at all.
This video is pretty good. I'd give it a 3.0-3.5 out of 5. I think you are good, I think that your mew2 is good, but I don't think the same can be said about your opponents. The vast majority of your opponents in this vid can't DI, can't respond correctly, and most of them don't even seem to know how to use their character. I was afraid of this. I've noticed the same with my mew2 as well. I usually wreck lesser opponents, but then when I play the people who know what they're doing, it's a different story entirely. I would have liked to see you against more people who are at or atleast close to your skill level. It is entirely possible that I am just being overly critical and negative, and certainly possible that I am just ignorant on the skill of you and your opponents, but from this vid I can't say that I was extremely impressed. As I said, I think you and your mew2 are good, and show true potential. However I'd like to see you play against better opponents, and vids of you performing "combos" against people who can actually DI. I say this because when people DI correctly, all of this changes. I guarantee you that if any of these people could actually DI that most of these "combos" wouldn't happen.
Of course that's the weakness of combo videos in general, most involve pseudo"combos" that require miserable DI from those being hit.
Good music, Intro was a little corny, but a pretty good vid overall.
EDIT: Upon further viewing I came up with a few more suggestions:
1. The music was alright, E.S. Posthumus is a little overused though, you might have wanted to go with something a little more original. The second song was bad. I'm going to be honest, the second song was a terrible choice lol. The only one who can pull off Madonna or Britney Spears in a combo video is MaNg0 lol. The third song was good, a little overused, but very good still.
2. You need to stop Upsmashing. It might have been nothing more then mistakes, or button input errors, but you don't want to upsmash that much. Upsmash is not a good move lol. The only true reliable use I've found for it is when Ness tries to Dair you XD. Instead of upsmashing, you should probably use Ftilt, Dtilt, UPtilt, Wavedash-grab, JC grab, or something more reliable and with more combo potential. Nair is a good choice also.
3. There are a few clips that are not very good, and that I wouldn't put in a combo vid. Clips where you seem to get lucky instead of actually making a good play. Of course this happens to everyone, everyone gets lucky, but remember this is a combo vid, this is supposed to be just you ******.
Parts such as: 0:50, 1:03, 4:03, etc that are not the result of anything you really did, but more of your opponent's error and your good luck. There are several other clips of you just hitting them once, or wavedash-grab upthrowing, which are not combos and don't really belong in combo vids. We want to see long strings of successful attacks or clever mindgames, not simple, obvious one-hit-KOs that happen because of your opponent's bad DI, reaction time, and decision making.
Overall I think that you're pretty good, your mew2 is dec and should be worked on, I'm sure your friends can attest to your skill, although I've never seen any vids of those that you've beaten so I wouldn't know about that, only that this vid is decent, but unsatisfactory. Keep workin
I'm looking forward to seeing your slow and steady improvement take place, and I'm looking forward to more of your vids
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