lol the Chival Marth. too goodz
So I attended my first ever melee tournament, and got some matches vs t1mmy and t0mmy (but t0mmy's weren't recorded). These are the first two from our loser's finals set, i went fox for the rest.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=93JLyBrUJuQ Moxin(marth) vs t1mmy(fox) 1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q-BfRg4MV0U Moxin(marth) vs t1mmy(sheik) 2
My hands were kind of shaking, so in game 1 i never did any run off edgeguarding even when i should have and killed myself on what should have been my winning edgeguard, lol. Also i threw out too many fsmashs and spotdodged alot.
Besides that, any critiquing is much appreciated. Thanks.
Ref: Moxin667
Not bad for your first tournament man.
Its hard to not comment about the fsmashes when thats the number 1 thing you did wrong. You got like 200% each game because of them...its one of those things you cut out of your game in time so I wouldn't stress. Also, you'll get less nervous in time, so that will help a lot.
Way too much wavedashing. You don't look comfortable in your dash. In that Fox match there was no DD pivot grab or DD grab approach at all, and thats your number 1 weapon. Against opponents who you can't defensive grab, you'll need to be better with your DD in order to hit them at all. The offensive grabbing you did do was very predictable; you wavedashed into a certain distance (a little less than tipper) and then DD once and grabbed. You need way more mixups than that.
Too much jumping. Don't worry youre Marth, you got a big *** sword. If you are stuck in the air, don't panic and jump. React. This tendency translated to when you were on platforms too; you are a little too scared when you are above them. Pop out a lightshield, let them hit it, double jump and punish them. Drop down if you predict their chasing you up and utilt them. etc.
Be better and quicker on the ledge. Know your options and execute them quickly.
You weren't making an active effort to bait. Especially in that Sheik match. Make them scared of your approach.
Don't try to surprise them, try to trick them.
Good Marth. Keep it up. It seems you have a solid understanding of %s, I was impressed that you did fthrow fsmash on a Sheik in the teens. The chaingrabs on Fox were on point too. Good ****.